Is your pace off? Is your manuscript sagging in the middle?
Then you need F-A-D!
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How does F-A-D help? It's a secret scientific writing recipe for Feeling, Action, Dialogue.
All you do is make sure every scene has Feeling, Action, Dialogue, and the pace will fly off!
BUT WAIT, THERE'S MORE!!!!
Along with each supply of F-A-D we'll throw in a free copy of GMC - that's all about character Goal, Motivation and Conflict.
When combined with F-A-D, the GMC will make your manuscript unputdownable!
No manuscript is complete without F-A-D and GMC. Our operators are waiting for your call!!!!!
#not to be used in conjunction with any other offer. Offer only valid for those who put in the hard work. Results may vary. Please see your doctor if pain persists.
3 comments:
Oh my gosh, I laughed so hard! I love this! Thank you. I needed a laugh something fierce.
hehehe, thanks Heather.
I'm in the scene-card writing phase of Ondine 3 and it's allowing me to see the big picture . . . and be very silly. Glad I gave you a giggle.
Sign me up for some of that!!!! LOL.
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